Somehow, by reducing the well-known and respectable event to the simplest language, you've also managed to show it as it is- reduced to the meaningless routine it has become. The language shorn of any adornments does the same to what is being described- quite an original experiment I'd say, not sure if there are literary parallels to this.
:) I wasnt sure about posting this at first but when I read it over n over again, it did seem to have a ring to it. I dont know about literary parallels, I was curious too. Maybe if there is something like poetry in pidgins, that would be it I guess. Must try more of this ;)
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Hello Arafat, welcome back
It made me laugh.
Somehow, by reducing the well-known and respectable event to the simplest language, you've also managed to show it as it is- reduced to the meaningless routine it has become. The language shorn of any adornments does the same to what is being described- quite an original experiment I'd say, not sure if there are literary parallels to this.
@J:
thanks! feels good to be back! :)
@siyaah:
:)
I wasnt sure about posting this at first but when I read it over n over again, it did seem to have a ring to it. I dont know about literary parallels, I was curious too. Maybe if there is something like poetry in pidgins, that would be it I guess. Must try more of this ;)
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